Posted by js on September 13, 2003 at 20:16:32:
In Reply to: Does this sound right? posted by Amazing Grace on September 13, 2003 at 19:56:38:
a couple of minor rhythm things...If you had the music, these wouldn't be an issue.  Think 12/8 time... 1..2..3..4.. , etc.
The main thing missing is (' first time it occurs is at the beginning...the 2nd, 3rd, [and 4th] pitches in the piece) is a tonic scale step.
Instead of this: (beginning)  SCALES STEPS: 5-1--323--
play this: SCALE STEPS:  5-1--3213--  and the "321" is a triplet.
;^)